Tuesday, 22 March 2016

Where are we now???

Genre is fantasy

Main character with full character traits
Dragan
Traits:
At the beginning
- Curious
- Afraid
- Friendly
- Dreamy
Traits at the end
- Withdrawn
- Calmer
- Wise
story line (plot 101)
Finished

moment in your narrative The group confront Thangar in his castle
  • what are the conflicts? Man vs Man
  • which other characters? Thangar, Glicir, Thenduin, Kore and Oke
  • how does your character grow, or confirm a characteristic?
  • He becomes more mature and has more traits than at the beginning

Model text
  • to be approved by me if not one of our texts this year
  • example piece(s) posted
  • description, the way the author writes it
 dialogue, the way the author writes it











Thursday, 17 March 2016

The Allebeor Trilogy Part

The Allebeor Trilogy Part

The Climax in the Trilogy.
Black onyx doors booming shut behind them, Dragan gasped with wonder as he beheld the massive hall. It was bathed in a soft light that receded in the distance so the exact size of the hall was impossible to discern. The sound of the door closing rebounded and echoed along the hall, becoming louder every second. The scale of the room was too big for Dragan to grasp. He felt like an ant in an ant hill.
And then he noticed the walls. They were covered with carved lines that created an amazing piece of art. Each line was a different hue of the rainbow, which ranged from green to sapphire, all adding to the colourful halo that lighted the room. The floor was made of black onyx, which balanced the colour out, making the room a wonderful piece of craftsmanship. The room smelt of crushed pine leaves and reminded Dragan of the countryside, giving it a rural beauty alongside the complex stone work.
But a sad thought struck Dragan at this moment. "All this beauty", thought Dragan, "gone to waste on the dark king". He looked at his companions and saw the same reactions on their faces. And then he saw the dark throne. Upon it sat the King, smiling at his new guests.
"Welcome to Castle Celebrim, my humble home. I greet you as my guests."
"Save the pleasantries, King Thangar, for they are lost on our ears," replied Oke. Glicir growled in agreement.
"Why so hostile, Oke my friend? You are my guests and I will treat you so. All I ask in turn is that you are polite to me in kind.”
"Why should we be kind to you Thangar, when you have killed countless of our friends and comrades so you may have more power? I say that deed doesn't deserve kindness and politeness," retorted Dragan. It was painful to refer to the death of Kore but he was angry that they were bandying words with the King instead of fighting him.
"Ah, Dragan I almost forgot you. And for your insult my answer is thus. I have killed and I admit it. But have not the Vard also killed many people. And why? So another King or Queen can rule in my stead. But why? What have I done so that I anger you? What have I done wrong? And the answer is nothing. For you fight so that you may be King, Dragan. You fight for power. That is the answer.”
"You lie Thangar. You have done much wrong. You have enslaved dragons, killed innocent people in your own land and above all you have fought to gain more land and more power with war. The answer is one word. This word has controlled you since you enslaved the dragons. This one word is power."
The slither of steel on leather broke the silence that came after Dragan's statement. The King had drawn his black sword. His eyes, which were kind before, were now seething with anger and black with malice.
"How dare you say this too me, your King. Show me some respect, you young swine. I will kill you as easily as breaking a dry twig. I will sweep you away like the powerful storm I have become."
And with that he leapt off his throne and swung at Dragan with his black blade. Dragan brought his sword up just quick enough to block Thangar's blow. But for Dragan it felt like a ton of bricks had fallen on him. The strength of the King was astounding.
"I must use my shield otherwise my sword will not last long" thought Dragan as Thangar came in for another crushing blow. This time Dragan used his shield to block. But still the shock of the blow travelled up through his arm right to his shoulder. But now Dragan was ready. He lifted his shield and struck at the King. But even as fast as Dragan was the King was faster still and parried the blow on his sword. Dragan was shocked by the King reflexes and was starting to think he might die in this fight. His last fight.
The blows were starting to numb Dragan’s arm as Thangar repeatedly bashed down on his shield. But an idea was beginning to form in Dragan’s mind.
“A dangerous plan but it is dangerous times” thought Dragan grimly as Thangar bashed down on his shield for the uptenth time.
While Thangar was preparing for the next blow, Dragan whispered a prayer and got ready to raise his shield. His companions gasped as they saw what he was doing. But while he started to raise his shield Thangar cut into it and yanked it from his grasp. Dragan was now open to any attack. Thangar dropped his sword because of the shield wedged into it and drew his dagger out of his belt. He swiped it down at Dragan’s neck. As he did Dragan raised his arm to shield his neck. Then he realised he had no shield and a black hole loomed inside him as he realised he will die.
All in this registered in Dragan’s mind as the dagger came down. Then it hit his wrist which was shielding his neck. The dagger was sharp and it cut Dragan’s whole hand off. He screamed in agony as his lifeless limb fell to the floor. Thangar stopped and watched as Dragan kneeled over in pain. He had won. But Dragan did not give up yet. He had come too far to fail and now courage and a new sense of persistence gave him hope.
He raised his sword in his left hand and swung it at Thangar. Thangar’s eyes opened in shock as he saw the blade swinging at him. He started to bring his sword up but for once his reflexes failed him. There was a squelching sound as the King’s head fell onto the floor. Then the Company cheered. For their enemy was dead and their Quest was done. But Dragan just slumped on the floor in a pool of his blood, eyes closed.

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Fantasy Characters

Genre: Fantasy
Setting: A place that has mountains, deserts, forests, rivers, plains and grass lands. It is a mix of everything.

Human: Dragan Male
Desire: To kill the dark king Thangar and destroy the jade amulet Sauorix. Also to bring peace to Allebeor and explore the land outside of Kar.
History: He is part of the rebel group Vard from the age of 10 and is a good friend with the dwarf Oke. The dwarfs are helping the Vard and live in close harmony in there mountain Kar, the dwarfs safe refuge. He is 17 years old. He is also one of the last immortal people who are descendants from the elf-human hybrids created thousands of years ago. They are called the Dunadil.
Traits:
At the beginning
- Curious
- Afraid
- Friendly
- Dreamy
Traits at the end
- Withdrawn
- Calmer
- Wise
Situation:
Reaction:
Elf: Thenduin Female
Desire: To rescue the dragons that Thangar kept and return to Osilon, his home in the thick elf forest Welden.
Traits at the beginning:
- Fair
- Tough
- Selfish
- Kept to herself
- Depressed
Traits at the end
- Kinder
- Open
- Happier
Situation:
Reaction:
Human: Thangar
Desire: To have control of all of Allebeor by waging a long and hard battle against the elves and the Vard. He also wants to enslave the dragons so he may have more power.
Traits:
- Bad
- Mean
- Violent
- Sly
Human 2: Kore Male
Desire: To take the Amulet Saourix back to Minas Kore, his fathers kingdom.
History: He has lived in Minas Kore for his whole life and his farther sent him to bring the jade amulet to him and make their land the most powerful in Allebeor. Since Thangar was the so called King Minas Kore has become a lesser place but Kore's father believes that the amulet will restore its power.
Situation:
Reaction:
Urgal: Skeg Male
Desire: To also kill the dark king so his people can live in peace and not in fear.
Situation:
Reaction:
Dwarf: Oke Male
Desire: Oke has a similar drive to Skeg. He wants Thangar dead so his people can come out of hiding and return to their famed kingdom Dure Kar.
Situation:
Reaction:
Dragon: Glicir Female
Desire: To free her kin and return to the mountain home Mount Zeluk.
Situation:
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Tuesday, 9 February 2016

Canterbury Tales Character

Pardoners Tale:
Tom, Dick and Harry are all archetypes. Their traits are obnoxious, mischievous and greedy. They are mischievous when they are chasing the landlord and peeing out of the church stable. They are obnoxious when they come into the pub and get drunk and they are greedy when they all want the gold for themselves.  

The Genres of the Canterbury Tales

The Nun’s Priest.
Genre: Fable
A fable is a story that has talking animals, a moral at the end. Animals are given human characteristics and are normally the main characters. Morals are things that seek to explain things about life. The Nun’s Priest tale contains all of the features of a fable. Firstly this story applies the use of talking animals. One animal is Sir Russell Fox and he says "Again! Again! What a tasty voice". This is a clear example that there are talking animals and that they have human characteristics. But perhaps the surest sign that this is a fable is when the Priest tells the audience directly that it has a moral,"To be on your guard against flatterers. This moral means to know and to be on your guard against flatterers and not to be flattered. Both Chaunticleer and Sir Russell Fox use flattery to deceive each other. Chaunticleer is flattered when the fox says to Chaunticleer he is really good at singing and Chaunticleer thinks that the fox is here to hear him and not eat him. Sir Russell Fox is fooled when Chaunticleer says for him to shout to the farmers following him to move away because they have no chance to catch him. While he is shouting Chaunticleer gets out of his mouth and flies up and away. These examples prove beyond doubt that the Nun’s Priest tale is fable. Another feature to be considered is the shortness of fables compared to other stories like The Wife of Bath's folk tale.


The Wife of Bath.
A folk tale has normal characters and events and seeks to explain things about life and the human condition. They also have make believe elements but overall the story is realistic. The Wife of Bath is a perfect example of a folk tale. Firstly the story uses normal characters like the Sir Codsbrain who is a low ranking knight. He is a archetype and so a normal and simple character. This is a crystal clear example of a normal character. The story also wants to explain about Sir Codsbrain's condition of always annoying women and flirting with them. Sir Codsbrain's condition is that he keeps flirting with women even when the Queen says he can't and this gets him into trouble. Also he thinks that he has control over women and expect them to like and follow him. But at the end he learns from the Old Woman that for women to like him he must let them have power over him. Finally at the end Sir Codsbrain marries the Old Woman and then later they are in bed and the Old Woman turns to a young and beautiful girl and then everybody is happy. This means that this is magical but the rest of the story is realistic. Over all I have given enough to say that the Wife of Bath's Tale is a folk tale beyond doubt.

The Pardoner's Tale.
A morality tale only contains a moral and otherwise is a normal story. The Pardoner's Tale is a morality tale. It has a clear moral that the Pardoner says to the audience"If you go looking for Death don't be surprised if you find him".This moral happens when 3 people go looking for Death because Death took their friend. An old man told them that he saw Death at a oak tree. At the oak tree they find a bag of gold. They decide that 2 people will guard the gold and the third will go and buy some food. The 2 guards also decide when the third goes away that they will kill him and have all the gold. The third one decides to but a poison and give it to the others. One he gets back the 2 guards kill him and then they drink the wine with the poison and they also die. By looking for Death and finding the gold they do in fact find Death, thus proving the Pardoner's Tale's clear moral which makes it a morality tale.

The Knights Tale.
A chivalric romance story is a tale that contains chivalry and romance. Chivalric is the rules of fighting that knights used. Romance is love between 2 people. The Knights Tale is a perfect example of chivalric romance. The romance is between 3 people: 2 men and 1 women. The 2 boys names are Palamon and Arcite. They both love the women Emily. Both Palamon and Arcite are in a prison and then they look out of the window and see Emily. They both immediately fall in love with her. Later they decide to joust to decide who will marry Emily. This is a chivalric example because they both take up the rules of fighting by saying the winner will marry Emily and they both abide by these rules. In the end Palamon wins and he marries Emily. Taking all this evidence into account it is clear that the Knights Tale is undoubtedly a chivalric romance.

Friday, 5 February 2016

The Nuns Priest Storyline

Nuns Priest Tale

Ordinary World: The Nuns Priest has a farm and has a proud cock in his farm. His name is Chaunticleer and he is in love with a hen called Pertelote. 
Disruption: The disruption is the fox showing itself to Chaunticleer. The night before Chaunticleer had a dream about a fox but this is only foreshadowing.
Conflicts/Events:
1. Chaunticleer has a dream about a fox.
2. The next day the fox shows itself and flatters Chaunticleer by saying how good his singing is.
3. Chaunticleer starts to sing much more and then the fox steals him.
4. The fox runs away with him but Chaunticleer also flatters him and escapes.
5. At the end Chaunticleer learns he must not be flattered because he doesn't want to get caught and taken away by another animal.
Climax: I think that the climax is when the fox has taken Chaunticleer and Chaunticleer is trying to flatter the fox and you are not sure if the flattery will work. This is because either Chaunticleer escapes and it is a happy ending or Chaunticleer could be taken by the fox and he could die.
Outcomes: The fox is hungry and annoyed that Chaunticleer got away, Pertelope is with Chaunticleer and is happy and Chaunticleer has lernt his lesson to not be flattered.




Monday, 1 February 2016

Wife of Bath Storyline

The Wife of Bath

Ordinary World: Sir Codsbrain is in Camelot and flirting with the women.
Disruption: The Queen Guinevere sees Sir Codsbrain flirting and takes action to sentence him to death.
Catalyst: Queen Guinevere is the catalyst in this tale.
Events/Conflicts:
1. Sir Codsbrain flirting with Amanda. Man vs Man
2. He's caught by Queen Guinevere red handed and is sentenced to death. Man vs Man
3. Guinevere stops the executioner from killing him because it is the interval. Sir Codsbrain is let off but he is so stupid he tries to flirt with Amanda again and is sentenced to death after the break. Man vs Man
4. Sir Codsbrain is saved again by Guinevere again and is set a task to find what women most desire. Man vs Man
5. He is rejected by all the women he asks and thinks he will die. Man vs Society
6. But he finds a old women who says she knows the answer and she will tell him the answer if he does what she asks later. 
7. Sir Codsbrain takes her to Camelot with the old women and tells the answer.
8. He is correct and he is let free by Guinevere.
9. Then the old women asks him to marry her and he must accept for she helped him.
10. Sir Codsbrain is in conflict with the old women and this may also be a climax because you are not sure if their relationship will end well.
11. They are married and Sir Codsbrain accepts his future. Everybody is happy and the pair live happily ever after.
Climax: The climax is when Sir Codsbrain is about to answer the question and you are not sure if he is right or wrong. If he is right he will live but if he is wrong he will die. This is why it is the climax. 
Outcomes: Sir Codsbrain and the old women is happy, Amanda is free from Sir Codsbrain and Guinevere and King Arthur are also happy.